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"An Unsweet Life"

Posted on March 1, 2012 at 10:40 PM

Here is a poem I wrote a few days ago. It was supposed to be a short, 14 line poem that disscussed something you would regret if you died right now. Mine was about not completing my life and living life to its fullest. So here is the poem I wrote, "An Unsweet Life."

When the final bell hs rung,

When death stands before you,

With a crooked grin,

With thirsty eyes.

One wonders if their life was meaningful,

If one met their life goal,

Or fell far from the mark.

To feel empty before death,

Is to have an empty life.

To have a life uncomplete,

To have a life so unsweet,

Sends pangs to one's heart,

And is to end chills,

Down ones heart.

So there you have it. Feel free to comment below on what you think.

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1 Comment

Reply Captain Jack
1:43 PM on March 3, 2012 
Deep. Very deep.

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